Представленный Вами вариант был довольно неплох. Проблема, как обычно, в артиклях
и предлогах. Правильный вариант ниже (оригинал еще ниже).
Alpha Lines: it's a variation on the theme of the old, well known Lines. So if
you are a fan of the usual Lines, you simply MUST HAVE Alpha Lines. Even if you
are not a fan of Lines, you will enjoy Alpha Lines, because there is something
special in it - we used letters instead of balls and words instead of lines.
The rules are simple. There is a field, consisting of squares and three words.
Every turn four letters appear and these letters are in these words. You have
to gather the words of these letters. You can do it as you wish: down, across
or even place diagonally. But there is only one limitation - the word has to
form a straight line. If you have transferred a letter, but no word has appeared,
you don't get any points and the following four letters appear. If you have gathered
a word, it disappears and you get the number of points the same as the number
of letters in a word. If you have gathered several words at the same time, you
get the number of points as the sum of
letters multiplying the number of words.
Оригинал:
Alpha Lines - it's variation on theme of old, well known Lines.
So, if You are fan of usual Lines, you simply MUST HAVE Alpha Lines.
Even You are not a fan of Lines, you will enjoy Alpha Lines, because there is
something especial
in it - we used letters instead of balls and words instead of lines.
The Rules are simple. There is a field, consisting of squares and three words.
For every turn four letters appear and these letters are in these words.
You have to gather the words of these letters. You can do it as you wish: down,
across or even place obliquely.
But there is only one limitation - the word has to form a straight line.
If you have transferred a letter, but no word has appeared, you don't get any
points and the following four letters appear.
If you have gathered a word, it disappears and you get the number of points the
same as the number of letters in a word.
If you have gathered several words at the same time, you get the number of points
as the sum of letters multiplying the number of words.
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момент не имею представлений о
грамматике иностранного языка, то пришлось воспользовался переводчиком PROMT
дабы получить
английский вариант составленной аннотации.
Прошу напечатать правильный вариант, и ответить
на вопрос: "С какой сепенью доверенности следует
относиться к таким вот электронным-переводам?"
Текст на русском:
В работе выполнено построение математической модели, предназначенной для
планирования объема среднего ремонта железнодорожного рельсового пути.
Исходными данными для ее разработки явились реальные значения длины
рельсового пути, подлежавшего замене, длины железной дороги и грузооборота
ОАО РЖД в период 2002-2003 г.г.
Текст на английском (PROMT)
In work construction of the mathematical model intended for planning of
volume of average repair of a railway rail way is executed. The initial data
for its development were real values of length of the rail way subject to
replacement, lengths of the railway and a turnover of goods of Open Society
RZHD during 2002-2003 yy.
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